Needhelp with my personal statement. It’s based on my relationship as it’s for my visa, needs to be corrected reorganized paragraphed please so it looks professional and it has to be written in first person I have made it sound like first and third person.I am applying for partner visa with my partner and it’s a personal statement explaining the four aspects of our relationship since were both struggling in making it professional.I have attached my personal statement. It is 17 pages long but it needs to be cut down to 6-8 pages. I believe most of my sentences are kind of repetitive so when the expert does edit and correct my work by rephrasing the sentences i guess it will cut down to 6-8 pages.
Also it needs to be written in first person as its me thats writing the statement.
Attachments:
5680419_1_asleen-personal-statement–2-.docx
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